Sunday, March 20, 2011
Storyboard Feedback
My pitch for the major project went quite well I thought. I had already got a lot of feedback after showing my roughs to a few people, so I had the chance to fine tune it already. Over all I think I have to portray the stalking part in the beginning a bit more over the top and make more impact with voyeur angles. Also the ending shot or shots, there was some discussion whether or not both were needed for impact value perhaps just using one was better. I was quite happy overall how it went.
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I liked your pitch! I found the post-it notes with the newspaper good and more textured artistic substance, and I like the characters, I found the colouring for the concept a bit hard to understand and I wonder how it will work together so it'll be good to see some more better cleaned up images of colour for examples, and I found the story worked fine I would like to see both scenes in the film myself as I believed they worked better however it would probably work better with other framing and staging and more silly "pun" humour!
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